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Re: If I Could Go Back
This is a good poem and I believe it gets to the heart of the topic. However about half to 3/4 of the way through, it kind of felt like ...
Oct 24, 2014 -
Re: You.
I think this is a great theme and a fair short story. Though I like the feeling of detachment the story gives I do not think it would hurt to ...
Oct 23, 2014 -
Re: Between Hell & Heaven
This is a very well written short story. The descriptions were perfect and I could imagine everything very clearly. Toward the end I feel like the story had a bit ...
Oct 22, 2014 -
Re: i am not sick
Alright, this story defiantly has its pros and cons. The only cons are really some grammatical issues, no capital letters, and I feel some parts could have been rewritten. I ...
Oct 22, 2014 -
Re: Take Me Back
This is truly beautiful. I must congratulate you on the rhythm, the poem seemed to flow as smoothly as rushing water. I also found the selected topic quiet interesting. I ...
Oct 22, 2014