Noelle

Hi there! So this is what Bridges is like, huh? Everyone seems so darn nice and over reactive. I hate it xD As the novel is progressing here, I'm really ...

Hi there! Why'd it take me so long to get to this? Shame on me! The thing I really like about this chapter is your description of the Syrin transfer. ...

Hi there! I'm back again! Relief went through her when she saw the bare wooden walls. Usually when describing relief, people say 'relief washed over her'. Saying that relief went ...

Hi there! So I read this all the way back the day you posted and didn't get around to reviewing it until just now. Really, what's wrong with me? Shame ...

Hi there! The flashback in the beginning was very well placed. At first I thought I was just reading another flashback that would fit into the story later on. But ...

Hi there! You're in luck. This review has zero, count 'em zero, nitpicks. Yay! Mainly 'cause Therese mentioned everything already. Okay, one thing I have to say is that dreams ...

Hi there! Oh yes! I've been so preoccupied with Juno's relationship that I forgot about Frey's! Thank goodness he's finally found someone. Up to this point it's like he hasn't ...

Hi there! When father was still living here Father should be capitalized here. You're using the word as a name so that's why. It was probably just a typo, but ...

Hi there! Yay! I'm all caught up! :) So first things first, you have a few typos and left out words. I'd point them out for you, but that would ...

Hi there! I'm so glad that Castor feels some guilt about all of this. I mean, if she didn't why would she be so concerned right? It seriously gives me ...

Hi there! The trolls—a good deal shorter than the rest of the group—had to be helped up. Their muscles were threatening to give out by the time they reached the ...

Hi there! Miles was just stepping out of the inn, when he saw the horse trot down the steet. Castor was walking by, and she quickly hurried past it and ...

Hi there! I was lurking through the site, trying to find new things to read. And I remembered that you had a novel posted on here. So I was like, ...

Hi there! Oooooh, the first review of my adopted novel. I'm so excited! ^_^ THE BOWSTRING WAS DRAWN BACK and released with ease and speed. Hm, I'm not sure how ...

Hi there! I clicked on the link expecting another heart wrenching chapter. Boy did you deliver. I really don't know what to say. Honestly, I'm speechless. Mainly because of the ...