Noelle

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! He was one of the most stubborn, pigheaded people I knew, especially when it came to his music, so the despair ...

Hi there! Noelle back again for another Review Day review! Well, that seemed all too easy. Amber has been searching for her parents for a while now, and Josephine has ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! Through her tears she thought she saw a hut appear in front of her. Brushing away her tears, she looked closer. ...

Hi there! Noelle here for a Review Day review! First off, I agree with Lumi. The first paragraph is quite long. Now, I know that you know how to break ...

Hi there! Ah, my first review of my adopted novel!

Hi there! I know I've already expressed my anger to you about this ending, so I'm going to try and coral (that is so totally not how you spell that...don't ...

Hi there! I've noticed as I read through this that the paragraphs are shorter than they were in the last chapter. I like that. It really shows the difference here ...

Hi there! Wow, here I thought I was only a few chapters behind, but really I'm 5 chapters behind o.o When did this happen?!?! None the less, I'm here to ...

Hi there! Oh gosh, he's a faerie, not a troll. *facepalm* And remember, if you take too long... I might be forced to send someone after you. So, I'm a ...

Hi there! This is all getting very interesting. And we're finally back to the different types of creatures! Yay! I mean, you mentioned in the first chapter how Nik is ...

Hi there! Welcome to the site! :3 First of all, I have to say that I was really drawn in by the title. I'm a huge sucker for superhero stories ...

Hi there! Yes! I'm so excited to start reading this! :D First of all, this is rather short, so there won't be much that I have to say about it. ...

Hi there! So Sam is fascinated by trees. It's only been mentioned twice so far; once here and once in a previous chapter when Sam was sitting in that tree ...

Hi there! Oh, the irony! Nik is here to save Ari while she's off trying to find him. Something really mysterious is going on here. I think I know who's ...

Hi there! Her back was inflamed because Kylan had rubbed at the ripped parts. Wouldn't Kylan notice that her back is injured? Surely he'd be able to feel the injuries ...