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  • Poetry » General, General Re: If reviews were easy

    Ack I%u2019m so sorry I forgot to reply earlier! Honestly, I%u2019m also rambling whenever I open my mouth or start typing. Thanks for the review and have a great day/night ...

    Aug 19, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If reviews were easy

    Thank you! This poem was a bit of a rant, so I see how the theme can feel less developed or strengthed by anything.

    Aug 11, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: If reviews were easy

    Thank you! Hopefully I%u2019ll keep your kind words in mind in the future!

    Aug 11, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Is it enough?

    Thanks for the the review! Glad you enjoyed! :D

    Jul 21, 2024
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Looking at the future with stars in our eyes

    Thanks for the review! I%u2019ll definitely keep your suggestion in mind.

    Jul 18, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Walking in the rain

    Thanks for reviewing! I mostly just drew on real life experiences to come up with this imagery. Real life is the most realistic and descriptive after all! Glad you enjoyed ...

    Jul 18, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Is it enough?

    Thanks for reviewing! I guess I%u2019ll keep your encouragement in mind? Hope you have a great day/night ahead!

    Jul 8, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Is it enough?

    Thanks for the review! I don%u2019t really know what else to say, but just know I appreciate all the comments you%u2019ve left on my works. Have a wonderful day/night ahead ...

    Jul 7, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Is it enough?

    holds. I dunno if this counts as a review, a reflection, or just me yapping, Who knows? Maybe it counts as all three? Either way, thanks for the review, and ...

    Jul 7, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Is it enough?

    Apologies for practically ghosting YWS for the past few weeks…I wasn’t really feeling up to it. I’ll post my 2 required reviews later, I hope…if I’m not tired from school ...

    Jul 7, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: ou + topos

    Thanks for the review and have a great day/night ahead! :D

    Jul 7, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Walking in the rain

    Thanks for the review! Sorry to disappoint, but it is actually that simple, just me getting people out for the rain. Have a wonderful day/night to you too!

    Jun 29, 2024
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: Walking in the rain

    I- uh, wish my works have as much depth as you think, but it%u2019s not that complicated. The people being rescued (in quotation marks) are my father and brother who ...

    Jun 29, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Up at night (poem collection)

    Thanks for the review! Just letting you know that in the second stanza of the last poem, I kind of meant it as it is the last time the food ...

    Jun 26, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Up at night (poem collection)

    Thanks for reviewing! Glad you enjoyed! :D

    Jun 26, 2024


here is the deepest secret nobody knows (here is the root of the root and the bud of the bud and the sky of the sky of a tree called life; which grows higher than the soul can home or mind can hide) and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart i carry your heart (i carry it in my heart)
— e.e. cummings