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NivedaJames22

NivedaJames22

  • Short Story » Humor, Narrative Re: Corrupt Ghosts

    Hey cidrianwritersguild! This peanut candy mentioned in the story is actually really cheap...its like a traditional sweet that you get in Kerala...its real name is 'kappalandi mittai'. Its not like ...

    Apr 11, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: The Story Of An Introvert-3

    Thanks for pointing out those errors! I'll change them ASAP.

    Apr 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Teen Fiction Re: The Story Of An Introvert-3

    Hey! I didn't get your point about the "nine years old" part...I'm not sure what you understood from it, but what I meant to say was that her age was ...

    Apr 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: For The Want Of Bread And Jam

    Yeah...you're write it should be "I would". I hadn't noticed that error. Thanks for reviewing!

    Apr 9, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: The Story Of An Introvert-2

    I noticed the structure thing was actually annoying me as well. Something happened when I copied the document from word, I think. The next chapter has a little more about ...

    Apr 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: For The Want Of Bread And Jam

    Thank you! I'll make those changes in the poem

    Apr 9, 2021
  • Poetry » Humor, General Re: For The Want Of Bread And Jam

    Thank You! Actually I was trying to avoid too many metaphors and stuff...I just wanted to write something simple for a change...But I will keep your advice in mind for ...

    Apr 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Science, Dramatic Re: genetically modified organisms

    Genius:)

    Apr 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: An Ode to A Sunflower

    Thank you!

    Apr 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: An Ode to A Sunflower

    Thank you for such a sweet review!

    Apr 8, 2021
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Romantic Re: An Ode to A Sunflower

    Thanks for reviewing! I agree about the could use some work...thank you for pointing it out.

    Apr 8, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: The Story Of An Introvert-1

    Thank you for reviewing! Actually, there isn't much about Harry Potter... a muggle is just a non-magical person, AKA a regular human. All I meant to say was that Ruth ...

    Apr 7, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: The Story Of An Introvert-1

    Thanks for reviewing!

    Apr 6, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: The Story Of An Introvert-1

    Thank you!

    Apr 6, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Narrative Re: The Story Of An Introvert-1

    Thank you for your kind words. I'm new here, so could please explain how I can join the NovelStar competition?

    Apr 6, 2021


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