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Re: accidental Impulse
Ok, so here's another story. :D Comments are appreciated! The title is still pending, so if you have any suggestions, let me know. The collision made no sound. It didn’t ...
Nov 27, 2008 -
Re: Beyond the Hills-Prologue
Thunder clapped and lightning bellowed I've never seen "bellowed" used to describe lightning. . This was the night of the council of Elders. "A storm is brewing in the east, ...
Oct 18, 2008 -
Re: Prologue
So far, nothing peculiar had happened, which in itself was, well, peculiar. That's a bit confusing for an opening line. Since I can't suggest a way to fix it, I ...
Oct 11, 2008 -
Re: Suicidal heroes 1 Prologue
Prologue When the child was born, it already knew how to use its powers. It had been born into an average middle class I always thought that was one word ...
Oct 10, 2008 -
Re: The Dawning of Her
Whispers flooding through the walls like fire burning down the forest trees. People running away from something like water flowing over everything in it's path. Who is coming? And why? ...
Oct 10, 2008
