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Yes, please do.

Delted.

I'm wondering why this is in Fantasy... Looking forward to the next chapter! :D

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I was talking about the guywho hands Kyle his book or something?

:P Do another one!

"They are never gonna know what him 'em." -- Should be 'hit 'em'. I liked the middle parts and the end but I'm not sure who the guy your talking ...

Interesting... I haven't read Hitchhikers Guide or seen the movie. I thought the narrator was talking to an alleyway or is it a robot-alleyway? :?

The first policemen were formed in the Victorian Era, soldiers spent more time in India or around the Empire than in England. I should know because my great-great-grand something spent ...

Well, in the the history books I have read they stated that a whip woul have been used, a cat o' nine tails would be for a soldier in a ...

How come he can't hold her? Is it because he's sick or something? He couldn't hold her because his wife had died giving birth to Charlotte, somemen can't cope with ...

Of Mice and Men took a while for me to get into, it was the ending that I liked.

I don't get it, what are you trying to say in your poem? Are you angry about something or are you just depressed because it sounds like something I might ...

Did you hate Of Mice and Men or The Pearl. If you haven't read The Pearl just try it out, if you still don't like it try another author.

Thanks for reading and reviewing, Brian. This is just something I'm practising for an English assignment and it still needs a little more work into it.