Niraco

I'm really happy you seemed to enjoy this, it means so much to me. The newest part is published if you are still interested. Thank you once again for reading. ...

Thank you for you're review, I went back and looked over the things you pointed out and hopefully fixed them. Thanks once again! :D

Thank you so much for your review, I went back and fixed the things you pointed out. I also just published the newest part just to let you know. Thank ...

The length isn't really a bad thing, I just really enjoyed the poem and wished there was more, hahha. I really did enjoy it.

Thank you for your review, it really does mean an awful lot to me. I'm glad to see you liked it and I will (eventually) go back and change according ...

Thanks a lot for your review, it really means a lot to me. I will take on what you said and use it to shape my future works and go ...

I have no idea what happened with the formatting; I am sorry about that.

I suck at grammar too, glad to know I'm not alone. Thank you for the review by the way, it means a lot.

I didn't realize you had reviewed this - hence the late reply. I'm going back and changing what you pointed out. Also I'm trying to make Niraco and her Gifts ...

I made the poem like that. Due to their being no freedom death seems to be the only option. Depressing, I know. Has this cleared anything up?

I am actually really awful at grammar, thanks for that little refresher. I'll go back - when I get the chance - and fix what you pointed out. This actually ...

They say time is a healer - they're talking crap. Writing does help to accept it so it is rather brave of you to get out those sorrowful feelings.

I think you posted this in the wrong place.

Thank you for your advice, I'll keep that in mind. This actually isn't the first time I've tried to write this story. Each time I do the beginning is always ...

Thanks for your review. I went back and made the changes you suggested. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem so much.