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Re: Wages: Chapter Fifteen
*Cracks knuckles* Okay this is the last chapter I have to review (kinda sad, I want more). With a snarl, Zarr clenched his teeth and let his climax take hold ...
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Re: Wages: Chapter Fourteen
[Insert witty and comical opening here] “I’m your god. You hear me, you damn fish? I’m your god.” I snarled down at the growing cloud of bright-red blood, feeling a ...
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Re: Wages: Chapters Twelve & Thirteen
Let’s skip the opening bullshit and get right to the review? “Jesus, Mike, is that thing loaded?” Louis asked loudly, being able to bear the thought of being outright decapitated ...
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Re: Cracked
I really found myself enjoying this poem and the way you tackled it's subject matter. While the topic is something which has been done before you took in on in ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Wages: Chapter Eleven
Something I have noticed about yourself is that you’re always too hard on your writing. Let me tell you something, it’s good. So don’t worry too much. You’re an amazing ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Wages: Chapter Ten
Blah, blah, blah, I’m here to review, blah, blah, blah, let’s save us all some time and get this review rolling shall we? The voice disturbed me from my slumber-- ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Wages: Chapter Nine
Hello, Cirute, it’s your friendly review here, Niraco coming at you with another review. God these openings are getting worse and worse I tell ya. “Well, let me ask ya ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Solitude
Hello there, I hope you're having an awesome review day - I know I am! Anyway let's get right to it shall we. Solitude has been a topic for poems ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Waves
I actually have a fear of the ocean. It's so big that I fear if I even step in it I'll be taken away by the big blue. This poem ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: At least I survived
Whenever I am in some serious pain such as an illness, a feud or just a plain bad day I always tell myself 'it will all just be a memory'. ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Party Haiku
Oh, haikus, how I love you. The way someone can deliver a message, or describe a scene in just three small lines is amazing. This poem is very good too. ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Contemptable Wrest - (Ch. 7): Oaths Up in the Air
Hello there, I hope you’re having a very fun review day – I know I am! Anyway, I haven’t read all of the chapters of this novel so please bear ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Corps of Recovery: Part 8
Hello and happy review day! Now I have't read the other chapters in this novel so please bare with me as I struggle to totally understand and review this chapter. ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: Can you? Will you?
The first thing the first thing that struck me about this poem was its structure. You ask a question then answer it. I actually haven't seen many poems like it, ...
May 25, 2014 -
Re: The Realist
The poem you created is how I actually feel a lot of the time. It is very odd and scary when you realise that you are going to die. It’s ...
May 25, 2014
