Ninlil

Your welcome. And if you have any questions about the NS-period I am willing to help you find answers.

Oh, I should have read the prologue first. My mistake. Erebos is an interesting book, I can recommend it.

A good start for what I am sure will be an entertaining story. First I must mention, that I am not a gamer, so forgive me if I might seem ...

Oh, well it's not a big deal really. It works well for a name though.

Oh, sorry for not beeing clear. Zander is a freshwater fish. One of the most popular and delicious food fish in Europe. Especially in Germany and Austria, so in my ...

What about the name Zander?

An excellent second chapter. You managed to continue the story smoothly all the while handing over desired information. The reader is slowly drawn into the plot, as it becomes clearer ...

Thank you for your feedback. There is indeed a degrading purpose for Cao's name and for him going by a different one, the reason is revealed later on. And I ...