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Heyo, Shir! I'm Ninj, and I'll be your review for today. My corrections A teacher was teaching English in the class. He asked a student, " W hich tense has ...

OOWORDS. Nah, seriously. Me be Ninj, your reviewer for today. First, I want to say how much I loved the wordiness. Sometimes people do it and don't pull it off, ...

Shalom, this be Ninjy reviewing. I always hate reviewing poetry because I am absolutely awful at it, but I'll try. This isn't the best poem I've ever read, but it's ...

Okay. You demanded wanted a review, and here it is. You've already heard me say how much I love it, so now I'm going to break it down and try ...

Hi, Q. I'm Ninjy, and I'll review your work for today. My corrections; take these into consideration, please. Ballon Are any of you that person who wanted to be that ...

Allo. I'm Ninj. I'll be your reviewer of the day. My corrections; please take these into consideration. Pain seared across Alec’s palm ; a brilliant light filled his vision. “Alec, ...

First of all, I found this really great. I like reading in voice. I didn't find it racist, either. (I've watched enough TV to know that slaves in the colonies ...

Ayo! I'm Ninja, and your reviewer for now. My corrections It was before dawn, when the grass was misty with dew. A few hours until the sun was scheduled to ...

Heyo, I'm Ninja, and I'll be reviewer for today. Overall, this piece was rather mysterious, and very intriguing; good work on that area, certainly. The first big thing I want ...

Ooh, this is great! Like Pop said, it is short, and I do think paragraphing would help to slow it down. The way it seems is that one second you've ...

Okay! From just glancing over, I think this is good quality work, but try to keep the paragraphs separated more. It's rather hard to read otherwise. What I would change ...

*shudder* CREEEEEPYYY. Anyhoo. Few nitpicks: “Th-there is n-no way your human,” Correction: "you're". "I just have to get around the creature!" Did you mean to put this in italics? Since ...

Herro! I am the Stealthy Nom Nom (I am forever in debt to Nova for that name), and I shall comment/review. I liked the emotions portrayed in this, and all ...

... Well, this was mildly to moderately to severely awesome. I actually have no nitpicks. Shocker, ain't it? Inner Author: Pft. No one can go without any nitpicks. Me: Wanna ...

Naw, it's not too morbid. A touch so, but not entirely. Nitpick: "Once upon a Time" "Time" doesn't have to be capitalized. Actually, it really shouldn't be. Your teacher was ...