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Re: How Hard It Is To Want Someone
Hello, I'm Nike. Today I stopped by your poem because of your avatar. It's so cute! I love the Little Mermaid ha-ha. Anyway, here's my review. I don't really review ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: Once Upon A Wish
Hi, I'm going to review your piece. It's short and sweet. Let's start. We located our swim bags, sitting next to each other on the curb. "Next time, I'm gonna ...
Nov 27, 2011 -
Re: An Ugly Girl
Hello fellow writer. I know why this is a featured work... it's beautiful. This story has a bowl full of emotion. It's captivative and thoroughly detailed. I feel in love ...
Nov 26, 2011 -
Re: Cold Night
Hey!! It's Nike, here to edit like you requested. On that cold, silent night When you forgot you loved me You closed your eyes and thought of me But didn’t ...
Nov 12, 2011 -
Re: Hear No Silence
Hey! At first, when I saw the title, I thought this was going to be something a bit frightening. But, to my surprise, it wasn't. The fact that it wasn't ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: All Hallows Eve
Hi! We're getting right to the review. I enjoyed this poem. I'm not a poem person, I'm not the best example for a poet. But, I decided, why not? It ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: The Boy Named Suffering
To tell you the truth, I enjoyed this piece. It brought a new light into this picture perfect world. You see, many people write about this having a happy ending, ...
Oct 31, 2011 -
Re: It was only one date.
Hola! I'm trying Spanish here :D Okay, I read this short, very short, story. There's nothing really here that I could actually edit since it's so short. Overall I thought ...
Sep 25, 2011 -
Re: if life could just have UNDO button....!!!
Okay, Hi youngtalentkritz. To tell you the truth, this was... um, confusing. I didn't understand this at all. LIke, yeah sure, I understood the plot but it was too fast. ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: One in Every Class
I read this over during school from boredom ha-ha but I really loved this! It really connects to other youngsters out there with the same problem. Jared is a jerk, ...
Sep 21, 2011 -
Re: For the Boy Who Sits In Front of Me in Science
Ohmygosh, sorry but I'm touched by this piece. It's great. You put in the perfect amount of emotion. A lot of teenagers get this problem, and with your words you're ...
Sep 2, 2011 -
Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P-- part 6
Hi, I'm Nike from team TARDIS here to review! I was meaning to read this story earlier but never got the chance to, SORRY! I really am! But now I'm ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Addiction
Hi, I'm Nike from Team TARDIS here to review! I read this short fella', it was short and sweet. I wrote something about Addiction before, and your piece was better ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter One
Hi, I'm Nike from team TARDIS here to review! – Chapter One – Ignoring my shaking feet I descended upon the swinging rope bridge, trying not to look down. In ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Drivers Never Sleep (possible title)
Hi! I'm Nike from the TARDIS team here to review! “I’m dancing in the street. I’m d-d-dancing.” My intoxicated friend sang as she twirled like a five year old, in ...
Aug 28, 2011
