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  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: How Hard It Is To Want Someone

    Hello, I'm Nike. Today I stopped by your poem because of your avatar. It's so cute! I love the Little Mermaid ha-ha. Anyway, here's my review. I don't really review ...

    Nov 27, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Once Upon A Wish

    Hi, I'm going to review your piece. It's short and sweet. Let's start. We located our swim bags, sitting next to each other on the curb. "Next time, I'm gonna ...

    Nov 27, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: An Ugly Girl

    Hello fellow writer. I know why this is a featured work... it's beautiful. This story has a bowl full of emotion. It's captivative and thoroughly detailed. I feel in love ...

    Nov 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Cold Night

    Hey!! It's Nike, here to edit like you requested. On that cold, silent night When you forgot you loved me You closed your eyes and thought of me But didn’t ...

    Nov 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Hear No Silence

    Hey! At first, when I saw the title, I thought this was going to be something a bit frightening. But, to my surprise, it wasn't. The fact that it wasn't ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: All Hallows Eve

    Hi! We're getting right to the review. I enjoyed this poem. I'm not a poem person, I'm not the best example for a poet. But, I decided, why not? It ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: The Boy Named Suffering

    To tell you the truth, I enjoyed this piece. It brought a new light into this picture perfect world. You see, many people write about this having a happy ending, ...

    Oct 31, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: It was only one date.

    Hola! I'm trying Spanish here :D Okay, I read this short, very short, story. There's nothing really here that I could actually edit since it's so short. Overall I thought ...

    Sep 25, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: if life could just have UNDO button....!!!

    Okay, Hi youngtalentkritz. To tell you the truth, this was... um, confusing. I didn't understand this at all. LIke, yeah sure, I understood the plot but it was too fast. ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: One in Every Class

    I read this over during school from boredom ha-ha but I really loved this! It really connects to other youngsters out there with the same problem. Jared is a jerk, ...

    Sep 21, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: For the Boy Who Sits In Front of Me in Science

    Ohmygosh, sorry but I'm touched by this piece. It's great. You put in the perfect amount of emotion. A lot of teenagers get this problem, and with your words you're ...

    Sep 2, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, General Re: The Magical Diary of L.L.P-- part 6

    Hi, I'm Nike from team TARDIS here to review! I was meaning to read this story earlier but never got the chance to, SORRY! I really am! But now I'm ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Addiction

    Hi, I'm Nike from Team TARDIS here to review! I read this short fella', it was short and sweet. I wrote something about Addiction before, and your piece was better ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Novel / Chapter » General, General Re: Dreams Tell Lies - Chapter One

    Hi, I'm Nike from team TARDIS here to review! – Chapter One – Ignoring my shaking feet I descended upon the swinging rope bridge, trying not to look down. In ...

    Aug 28, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Drivers Never Sleep (possible title)

    Hi! I'm Nike from the TARDIS team here to review! “I’m dancing in the street. I’m d-d-dancing.” My intoxicated friend sang as she twirled like a five year old, in ...

    Aug 28, 2011


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— Leonardo da Vinci