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this was nice but it kind of made me stop liking it. i think that the MC is selfish at this moment and no one wants that. very nicely written ...

This was cute! I love it, but its incomplete! finish it i wanna know what happens next. You made me caught on this book-you cant just leave it unfinished we ...

Oh My God. You made me cry!!!! It Was perfect just perfect and very sad. At first i thought "What? Did she kill her?" but then it said that she ...

okay... Hi! I'll review your song today! I thought that it was nice. At some parts I lost my place and had to look back-It makes sense but I couldn't ...

I really liked this! I can't wait for the other parts!!! I agree with the writers above me about the editing though. Something really bugs me-why cant the MC just ...

I completly guessed that the guy that Emily bumped into was the guy Marissa likes. It was easy to find out. But i like it. The action is very great!! ...

I loved it! i'm so caught onto it. But the writers above me are right too. It's great-it does need editing thouigh in description and well alot of it. Keep ...

I have a different opinion-this was very catchy. If this were a book then i would read it. But you must eit some parts like the writers above me said. ...

I agree with the writers above me. The whole idea is amazing and th story is really good. Your description is lacking and i did get lost i many parts. ...

I liked this alot. The emotion was great. I was just blanked because you didn't describe the surroundings that well. All I knew is that there were some reporters and ...

This is very nice. It shocked me when the MC (Charlie) ad sex with her friends cousin, this made me more interested (which is very good!!!) no problems. Just keep ...

This is a very nice piece. the description is good. but you might wanna talk more and SLOW DOWN! your story is just sooooo fast. when you type: i feel ...

LOL! hilarious-but you do need to edit follow the wirters above me! Amazing work! :D Nike :)

one word: AMAZING! but I highly agree with Lava. You gotta edit some things-but overall this is amazing, I love the story about the frindship and the romantic side too. ...

this piece is nicely written. But you did have many mistakes so i think you should do what shubhiloves2write wrote. I'll loved this piece because it was well written and ...