Nightshade21

just finished all the changes thanks again for the help :)

I've never heard this song before but your flow and rythm in your parody was great. Your sta as were fun yet also thoughtful and deep whether you meant it ...

Thanks for showing what I could change to make it better. It really helps :)

Thanks and any help is welcome :)

This is really great and it shows the thoughts everyone has. It was a really awesome poem that brings the reader in and never lets go. The best stanza I ...

Thank you! and the title sounds awesome changing it now :)

This is really sweet and the flow and rhythm is great. My favorite lines are, ""Don't be afraid little one, We will protect you." I like this because its really ...

Lol! Consider myself tricked :)