Nightshade

Hi Octave. I rarely venture out of the poetry forums, so please forgive me for skipping over the nitpicks and shredding and criticism in general. I just don't have anything ...

This poem burns slowly. After my first read-through, this was an "awwwww" poem. Then after second and third and fourth and fifth read-throughs I started noticing the conflict in what ...

Persy, it is wonderful to see you playing with your style, and you've done it very well. This type of poetry is hardly my specialty, so we'll see how much ...

Hello there, Lumisir. Let's begin :) This is a mess. A wondrous, beautiful mess, but a mess all the same. You frequently give up coherency and development for the sake ...

Mustard and Kamas's influence shows :P You have an interesting start here. It's a departure from your usual style and has some pretty unique imagery. However, right now it doesn't ...

Hey earendil, finally here as I promised. You have an intriguing poem here, but right now it's being jammed up by the lack of clarity you bring to the main ...

Hi Matt. I'm going to have to break the streak of praise on this one. I'm guessing that the fact that you're posting here means that you want to improve, ...

Lumi, you're the best. I have nitpicks, but this was cutesy, so I won't be so serious about them. and seemed to have all the promise in the world. I ...

Hi MMM, I really enjoyed this. You've chosen your words with enough care and injected the piece with enough individuality that I had a terrible time find real criticisms to ...

Hey Persy, I'm finally here for the review :) This might be my favorite of yours. I feel like I've said that to you quite a few times recently, which ...

The first time I read through this I didn't really like it. After a couple more read-throughs I appreciate the intricacies of the piece much more, but there are still ...

I loved this. You stick with one idea through the entire piece and really develop it so it reaches it's full potential as far as impact. The style is also ...

Hi silented. Here to review "Said disease" :) I'm not sure exactly how I feel about the first stanza. The image you create is so bizarre and complex that the ...

Hey Kaitlin. I told you I would get around to this someday :D I rarely venture out of the poetry forums, so forgive me if this review isn't quite up ...

I'm really impressed with your improvement since "Bitten". You have some really nice elements in here, but there's a lot you can do to bring those elements out more effectively. ...