Nightmare

I blame auto correct for some mistakes. And, the reason I write things that are kinda weird is because I draw inperation from anime and sometimes how they translate it ...

Thank you! But, the reason you didn't understand was that this is the second chapter.

Nice parody. I could imagine the song vividly and it feels like it fits. That's the good part about good parodies. I tried one once... Who Let The Writers Out ...

Exelent. I think it's an amazing poem. My only problem with it is that you emphasize the good parts and not the bad parts to much. You gotta try and ...

Hmm... Very intriguing. Almost like mythology. It's hard to make every line ryme, believe me, I've tried. Well done. But, I kinda did have a hard time figuring out what ...

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Hello, nice to meet you! I'm Nightmare. My only problem with your story is that it didn't really have a satisfying ending. I felt like you could've added more to ...

I was going to say arrogant but I'm not the best at spelling and the auto correct was glitchy. Thanks for reviewing!

And thanks for reviewing!

Z's a boy and I forgot to mention that Lanna's 21. That's why I put that extra detail in