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Re: A New Adventure
That was utterly touching. Heart filled condolences for your friend......the use of simile in this poem is excellent.......I really liked how you made it look like a battle........❤❤
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: The woman who screeched
Thankyou.....will keep in mind what you have said
Feb 5, 2021 -
Re: The woman who screeched
Thank you so much for the review!! I will remember what you said
Feb 4, 2021 -
Re: Where We Lie
That is so damn long, and damn steamy😅😅......the vocabulary is amazingly complicated. And because of that, the poem feels deeper. It's nice...
Feb 4, 2021 -
Re: Drowned
The part with the 'hourglass' was witty. Nice use of metaphors. It was deep. I wish I could write poems like these
Feb 4, 2021
