Niebla

Hey sarebear, Okay -- first of all, I'll give you my honest opinion on this piece. I liked it, and I liked some of the issues it brought up -- ...

Hey, Blues! First of all - I love what you've done with the topic "Blue Jeans". It's a sad but well-written story, with no major flaws. You mention that you ...

Hey Fenrir77, This is really intriguing and ever so well told! The story is just so real. I don't have much critique for you ... the only thing I can ...

Hey AdamBH, I really loved this. I agree with much of Lilicia's review - there are a few things which could be changed, but there are some truly beautiful passages ...

Hey callmeike, This isn't bad! It's not the type of thing I'd usually read, but still, you held my attention which means you've done a pretty good job on this ...

Whoa. I realy like the way this turned out. At the beginning, I was kind of wary of the entire story ... I thought that, as you said, it would ...

Hey CadiT, Well ... I have to say that this held my attention, to say the least! The bus driver's odd manner immediately drew me in, and by the time ...

Hey WelcomingException, This is a really intriguing story. My main regret was that it was so short, but in a way it's a perfect concept for a flash fiction story, ...

Hey Jas, I'm sorry for the late-ness of my review! As you can probably already see from all the likes this piece already has and the fact that it's featured, ...

Hey tigershark17, I think you've done a really good job with this poem. In poetry, misery and self-harm seems to be quite a reoccuring subject, and that bothers me - ...

Hey ReisePiecey, Lovely. It didn't immediately hit me that the poem was about drug abuse, but by the last stanza I was starting to realise. And even throughout the entire ...

Hey Jagged, Wow! I really, really love this. It has such a mysterious, beautiful feel to it. You create such vivid images with your words, and with this poem you've ...

Hey Abigail, First of all - welcome to YWS! I hope you find everything you're looking for here. I read this story and I really liked it. I particularly liked ...

I don't have much of a review for you as I really can't find much wrong with this at all - but I really wanted to tell you how much ...

In a way this is quite a simple poem, but as others have said, quite true and relatable to many people. I liked it because it had a distinct sense ...