Niebla

Hey Kafkaescence, Thanks for requesting the review! I’m really sorry that it took me so long to get here – over the past couple of weeks I’ve completely failed to ...

Hey Gringoamericano, Thanks for the review request! I’m sorry that it took a few days for me to get here; I’ll get straight to the review now. First of all: ...

Hey again, Jas! I really like this! It’s short and sweet; the descriptions effective and unique and compact, somehow. The style flows and fits the mood of the piece pretty ...

Hey Jas, Thanks for requesting the review! I’ll get straight to it. First of all – wow. Something about this poem really hit me – few of the poems I ...

Hey there UpAndOut! It took me a couple of days but I’m here with the review! I’ll get straight to the point. I like the idea and the style of ...

Hey Soul, Sorry I’m a day late with this review. But I really enjoyed reading this – the writing is kind of beautiful and it’s overall a pretty intriguing chapter. ...

Hey Alpha, I’m here as requested! I’m sorry that it took me so long to get to doing this, but I’m here now and I’ll gladly give you my impression ...

Hey, Judy! I’m here to review as requested. First of all, my general impression was that I really liked this! I’ve never been a Star Wars fan so I was ...

Hey Qara! I was so happy to see that you’d posted this chapter! So I’m here with another review. :) The first thing I want to say is: Lovely. This ...

Hey Qara! I read this quite a while back when you first linked me, so I honestly don’t know why it’s taken me so long to come and review it ...

Hey there AJ, These are very powerful lyrics! They’re so full of emotion and while I was reading them I could just imagine them to some very powerful music. Have ...

Hey there Blues, This is a great chapter! I have to admit that the first thing I noticed was the messed up formatting but I know that you can’t edit ...

Hey Blues, I’m here with another review! I do like this chapter, especially the reality of the mess they both eventually made in asking a girl out! I did find ...

Hey again Dingobabee, I’m so glad that Stripess didn’t die! To be honest, as this part was so short I think you could have just posted it together with last ...

Hey Dingobabee, This is a great follow-on from the previous part, but what I did find with this piece was that the technical side (punctuation especially) went kind of downhill. ...