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Re: Internal Battleground
This is epic! I love it
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: I Attempt To Describe The Wind
Great poem! You're right. It doesn't make much sense, does it? But then again, that was the whole point of the poem. :) It seems a bit dark in places, ...
Jan 3, 2014 -
Re: Invincible
BEAUTIFUL! I just love this! :) It flows very well. There's just one little thing that I would change. In the fourteenth line, it says, "My stomach weighed down and ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: Another Side: Chapters 1-4
Great story! I like the originality you use to create your "bird-like" beings. One thing that I did notice is that you tend to write in an unclear way sometimes. ...
Jan 1, 2014 -
Re: Crayon Heartbeats
This is a beautiful essay? It's not quite like a story so I'm assuming it's an essay. :) This is an amazing way to look at life. The only thing ...
Dec 30, 2013 -
Re: ... and the Water Whispers Words
This is really good! It has a scatter-brained quality that is somehow not scatter-brained. It has a focus while being scatter-brained. It's great! I'm gathering that it's about a woman ...
Dec 2, 2013