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That is a cute poem! I love seeing something upbeat like that. Cheers!

The revision is now posted.

Thanks to all of you for the comments! Thanks Last Mohican--I love your name. I agree with you, Black Rose, those two don't rhyme well. But this is for English ...

Thank you all so much! I'm so excited to see nice comments! Yes, I am taking it further, just slowly, so expect more soon. I hoped that the dialect was ...

Dùbhlan slammed the book shut, and hastily shoved it under her blanket. Behind her door came another knock. "Yes?" she answered exhasperatedly. "Sorry to disturb you," said Burraidh, opening the ...

A brilliant work of tragedy. I don't think I can compare anything to this story's greatness.

I absolutely LOVE Vikings! I am crazy about Viking history, so I can't wait to read more of this! The grammar could use some work, but other than that, I'll ...

This is really a brilliant beginning. The only thing I can comment on, is that a few of the sentences are a little choppy, and I would suggest trying to ...

Thank you. I do not like my work to sound as if it was written in the present, and I'm glad I have gotten that across. This is all very ...

No, I'm not going to carry on with it. I like it as it is. I wrote it after I saw a special on the history channel about the Battle ...

This is very interesting. I love that the most ancient of cities are involved. I'm a history dork. Keep going on this story. It's brilliant.

Thanks, that is really encouraging. About the word "fairy" and "faery," in a way, they have different meanings. Fairy is a very general term. There is no such being that ...

Thanks for reading my story, and thanks for the suggestions. You're right, I will go and modify the story as soon as I can. Slainte! By the way, what language ...

Very beautifully written.

BTW, when the story talks about Queen Elizabeth, it's talking about Queen Elizabeth I.