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Thank you so much for the review! I found it much more insightful than many any other reviews I have received. I particularly liked your attention to deal and how ...

Hello Penn! I%u2019m really glad you liked it! (The colorisation is just thought in my head at the moment - if a blue is dark enough it is black - ...

Thank you so much for the review, Seirre! I'm really happy to hear that you like the poem and the imagery. I'd also love to read it aloud but I ...

Thank you so much for the review, Morri! It%u2019s great you%u2019ve stopped off at YWS. This poem is unedited, I write poetry but at this point am not the best ...

Wow! Thank you!

Thank you so much Wish! I%u2019m really delighted to hear that you enjoyed reading it! I%u2019m really excited you like my line about shattered starlight line as it is an ...

Thank you so much for the review, Vampricorne! Interestingingly, enough your interpretation is an interpretation I have seen quite often when it comes to reviews regarding my other poems. Ironically ...

Thank you! That really helps!

I%u2019ve actually just started rewriting. Are there any specific stanzas you think I really don%u2019t need other than the one above mentioned? And how long do you think it should ...

Thank you so much for the review, Seirre This poem is still unedited. It was a rant type thing that was actually writing while experiencing it%u2026 which%u2026 kind of means ...

The absolute truth... unutterable truth...

Thank you for the review Paige Yes... this chapter is about the progression of John's parent's relationship. How it went from sweet to sour. The baby John is obviously John ...

Thank you so much for another review Paige I'm working on summoning up more work... as I have a whole book but really need to expand it and make things ...

Thank you so much Paige I couldn%u2019t really tell you what happened because this is a sneak peek to what happens after everything in the book. I%u2019m really happy you ...

Thank you for the review, Rascalover I actually wrote this while experiencing the events, every word is a poetic representation of how I felt as it happened and every word ...