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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Love Letter to Prozac

    Unfortunately it%u2019s been a bit tough. I%u2019m not going to say that the Prozac hasn%u2019t helped a lot because it has but my depression was just so severe and last ...

    Feb 13, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Love Letter to Prozac

    Hi! I’m on Prozac too. It doesn’t really work as well for me as it seems to work for you but I’m very happy for you.

    Feb 13, 2023
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: OCD (A Spoken Word Poem)

    Thank you so much for the review, alliayh! Those suggestions help a lot. I recently got a diagnosis of Autism and OCD and this poem kind of was like an ...

    Dec 18, 2022
  • Poetry » Chickens, Chickens Re: The Noble Princess and The Warrior Chicken

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    I did enjoy this poem and the rhyme scheme created a delightful rhythm. Though I think in the last line a comma should be added after "fate". The idea of ...

    Dec 16, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: There Was Once A Girl Uglier Than The Wind

    I was wondering what you%u2019d think if I said: There was once a girl uglier than the wind: But nobody%u2019s ever seen the wind.

    Sep 14, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: There Was Once A Girl Uglier Than The Wind

    Thank you so much for the review, Horisun We%u2019ve actually been writing flash fiction essays for English class and I was looking online at other writers like a perfectionist writer ...

    Sep 14, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Literature Re: There Was Once A Girl Uglier Than The Wind

    Thank you, Seirre!!! You made some really good points and I think that all the advice you%u2019ve give I will need to look into. (I actually do know that poem%u2026 ...

    Sep 14, 2022
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: they tell me that writing is a form of art founded on rules

    This is so great!!! Not at all happy to be number 111 to star. Joke.

    Aug 12, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Dramatic Re: Rivers Sleep In Winter

    Yay. Thank you. I really like that interpretation. Thank you again.

    Jul 26, 2022
  • Other » General, General Re: Excerpt from NaNoWriMo project (edited)

    Oh my%u2026 this is one of Mint%u2019s dig ups. (I sincerely apologise%u2026 hehe.)

    Jul 17, 2022
  • Other » General, General Re: Excerpt from NaNoWriMo project (edited)

    I really like this. It was very engaging and fun to read.

    Jul 16, 2022
  • Poetry » Narrative, Health Re: Born A Girl

    Thank you, Gem! %u2764%uFE0F!

    Jul 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Is That Autumn I Hear?

    Thank you so much, Vampricorne!

    Jul 3, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Is That Autumn I Hear?

    Thank you so much for the review, Queenie! I'm really that you enjoyed it! (I'm a big fan of Summer because of holiday and my birthday... hehehe... but I've always ...

    Jun 25, 2022
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Narrative Re: Is That Autumn I Hear?

    Thank you so much for the review, Lizzy I am really happy that you enjoyed the poem! I'm very pleased to hear you liked the tone - it has been ...

    Jun 20, 2022


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