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Re: Second Always Comes Last Preveiw: Sir
Woah. This is really quite good, and I'm not lying. It certainly gave me something to think about. I wouldn't say that I found it horrifying, but it give off ...
May 8, 2014 -
Re: The Siege, Prologue: Insane?
Honestly, I don't think I can say much about this prologue. Now, the opening seem to be confusing in my opinion. The first sentence didn't make any sense. One of ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Winter Asylum: Chapter One
I think Aurora's character is, in fact, not of a five year old's, but more mature than most. Honestly, I think she's way too smart for her age, but I ...
May 7, 2014 -
Re: Winter Asylum: Prologue
Wow. The prologue gave me the feeling that these people were all (except Hudson) sexists. Now, I do love a fantasy book and since, you told the readers that your ...
May 7, 2014