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Re: A familiar face
I really like your character Ben or more so seeing Ben from Kyle's point of view because immediately Kyle sited Ben I actually felt his relief.
Aug 14, 2025 -
Re: The Council of Terra - Part 2
Honestly, I enjoyed your work. It is quite thrilling although sometimes I kind of get lost. I did notice a few spelling error but overall it was good
Aug 12, 2025 -
Re: grimacing at the sand on our feet (but i can't escape the softness of his lips)
I don't read poetry, except when it is in the books I'm reading but I must say that this is absolutely beautiful and I really enjoyed reading it.
Aug 12, 2025