Nephthys

Thanks for the feedback :) I noticed a problem with continuity in part 4, but it should be done soon.

PART 3 INT. TANGIN MANOR CHAPEL - DAY The FAMILY and FRIENDS of the Hollands are gathered in a small chapel for the wedding. A large WOMAN IN PINK sobs ...

PART 2 INT. PORTRAIT GALLERY - MYSTERY POV - DAY The CREATURE watches EUDORA and VANCE from a corner. When someone approaches, it hides. FX: Glowing golden humans. NOTE: The ...

Good idea! I'll post the next part soon :) I'll start off by saying, most of the scripts I'm familiar with work in a different style Stage scripts and television ...

Thanks very much for the review! I'll make the formatting a little clearer. Eudora's outfits having 3/4 sleeves was supposed to suggest the type of character she is? Like the ...

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I bent down over a sink in a bathroom I’ve never been into. I like this opening line :) Good start! the dim light didn’t seem to make the room ...

Alright, I honestly and completely read the story, and I still think that you need to read more. If you ask any writer what you can do as a young ...

Thank you both very much for the excellent advice :) I've gotten the comment about Prussia from someone else, too, so I think I should probably make it a little ...

It's great to get such detailed constructive criticism! Originally, I wrote this piece for a reading day we were having in Writer's Craft. The drips were originally meant to be ...

I'm glad that you like it :) I'm worried that it might be confusing to a reader who doesn't have any knowledge of Norse Mythology. I wrote this as a ...