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NekomimiChan

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Teen Fiction Re: The WIT - Chapter 1

    I love your writing style with a passion. Your main character is on point and his friend as well. I can easily guess the age group. The setting is explained ...

    Jun 15, 2014
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, General Re: Heaven and Hell chapter one

    Okay hmm. You need a better hook. For the first paragraph, it is very repetitive and lacks feeling from each of the senses other than "touch." The male character seems ...

    Jun 15, 2014
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Realistic Re: Casual Appearances

    This is ridiculously short. You don't have much of a hook and I really don't know the main character or any information about anything that's happening other than the setting. ...

    Jun 15, 2014


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