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Ok, thank you for your input. I never actually thought about that. Thanks!

I like how there was a lot of action, and you were pulled into the story until the end. There are a few run on sentences, and it would be ...

Wow! this is incredible! I love the tension that is built, and how it simply leaves you at the end with a single sentence. It really pulls you in, and ...

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I think that this is an incredible story, and the plot is simply fantastic! I think that it would be better if you translated the names to English in parentheses. ...

Nice! I like how you kept a consistent pace, and you used great facts that make the reader really feel like Jin's in the Ming Dynasty of China. I think ...