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I like the story's plot, and the characters seem realistic, like they could truly exist. However, I wonder... is Xavier really a name that would be from Imperial China? Also, ...

I like the unique plot, and the fact that the characters were well described. You could easily picture the characters in your mind. There are a few sentences that could ...

I think that this is an incredible story, and the plot is simply fantastic! I think that it would be better if you translated the names to English in parentheses. ...

Nice! I like how you kept a consistent pace, and you used great facts that make the reader really feel like Jin's in the Ming Dynasty of China. I think ...