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Well! Another chapter read. I like Castle's sass in this one. It was quite fun to read. Here's my review: Okay, for one thing, the chapter title was hilarious. It ...

Interesting new chapter. You get to see more of Castle's cranky-ness. She's so rude. Here's my review: You're taken back to the present, and Castle seems to lead a miserable ...

Nice second chapter! You get to see what her personality is like before this "Starry" person happened. Here's my review: I see now that you are alternating between seven years ...

Hello 4revgreen, nice beginning! It was an interesting first chapter with a cliffhanger. Here's my review: The first thing I noticed was that it said "1. present day." That's an ...

Well! This was quite intriguing. An alternate history. Its a very nice idea, and I like it. Here's my review: "chance to escape if he met with any Turkish patrolls." ...

Okay! I haven't read the previous chapters, so the devil guy caught me by surprise. This chapter was quite good, and it kept my attention the whole way through, so ...

Wowzers. How on Earth do you write so well!? Its amazing. You should publish something. Anyway, here's my review: This was a fascinating chapter. I mean, I haven't read all ...

Interesting! this seemed like an interesting chapter, what with the plan and all. So here's my review: "It had been a while since Buck had seen so many stars." This ...

This was a great chapter. It was so unexpected! Even though I know nothing about Pires, (which, by the way, is another great name) I could tell that Buck wasn't ...

Okay, so this chapter was fun to read. Buck seems like an interesting character, and I kinda like him, though I don't have much of a taste for poetry. so ...

Okay, this was an interesting chapter in a story with an intriguing idea. Here's my review: "More so than the rest of my entire life combined. " I like this ...

Okay, I haven't read any of the chapters before this, but here goes: This was pretty interesting. I really like your dialogue, especially with the humor added to it. It's ...

Well, this was an interesting chapter! The pacing is better than the last chapter I read, which is good. "Mel leaned back on her knees, looking relived. “You were thrashing ...

Well, I was quite surprised when I read this chapter, considering that I haven't read any of the ones before this. It was quite intriguing. Here's my review: "I read ...

Hmm, I'd probably know what was going on more if I had read the previous chapters. In any case however, this was quite interesting, and I'm feeling rather inclined to ...