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  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: A Blissful Trance

    Thanks for your comment! I wrote that poem a year ago. I know it is simple and cheesy as you said :D. I didn't give much thought to the frame ...

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Why darkness? Why light?

    You weren't nit-picking. You helped me alot :D

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Why darkness? Why light?

    That's very sweet of you! :D

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Tale of an Itinerant Storyteller

    Thanks :D

    Feb 3, 2016
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Why darkness? Why light?

    Thanks for your review :D Actually, the poem is more like a philosophical approach to why we suffer and why everything has a polar opposite (happiness and sadness, light and ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Tale of an Itinerant Storyteller

    The main message of that poem is that love sometimes can be unhealthy, humiliating and ruining. And reviews do help a lot, actually! Thanks for help!

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Tale of an Itinerant Storyteller

    Thanks for your review :D. Actually, this poem is a retelling of the story of Samson and Delilah. I'm sure most people know that old chestnut :D. It is a ...

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: The Tale of an Itinerant Storyteller

    Actually that tale is inspired by the story of Samson and Delilah, Samson is said to have 'subdued' foxes and used them against his enemies ;)

    Feb 2, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Okay With That

    Such a touching poem! so full of emotions and lost dreams. For starters, your poem is so 'romantic'. Not that it talks about love, but that you used poetry to ...

    Feb 2, 2016


If you pick up a starving dog and make him prosperous, he will not bite you; that is the principal difference between a dog and a man.
— Mark Twain