Nebesah

So I promised him I wouldn't tell ANYONE, not even someone far away online. But essentially both your guesses are incorrect. He didn't actually DO anything bad and then tell ...

Okay, so not to be one of those obnoxious people who make excuses for their work and try to explain why their work is awful or, worse yet, why the ...

Hello! My name is em and I will be massacring your story today. Before I begin, I would like to apologize for any hurt feelings/resentment/murderous desires you may feel after ...

Wow. I am very amazed that anyone liked this/took time to read it. Honestly, I don't like poetry and I like writing it even less but this just popped into ...

Hello again, here to review your revised chp. 2 and comment and do some grammar work: I will delete some things and change others just for good flow. They will ...

Yes, it will go on and God do I feel like such a hypocrite because I always point out people's grammatical errors. Oh well. Thanks so much for fixing them. ...

Thank you guys so much for all the positive and helpful things you said! I feel very special right now. :D Anyways, I will tell you that all the stuff ...

It's a good start for a book. The last sentence left me wanting to find out who was knocking, which is always good. It means the reader won't throw the ...