Nebesah

"Its eyes reflect our headlights that are quickly approaching." This was the only really awkwardly worded part. I was being pulled along by your story and then I had hit ...

Hello! My name is em and I will be massacring your story today. Before I begin, I would like to apologize for any hurt feelings/resentment/murderous desires you may feel after ...

So, my name is Em and I can sympathize with you. Once upon a time (ugh, I feel so old!) I was an angry, PMSing 13 year-old girl who hated ...

Hello. I am em and I will be reviewing your work to the best of my ability. But as I am not well-versed in poetry I may be harsh to ...

Hello! I’m Em and I am here to review your work. I apologize ahead of time for the intense nature with which I will attack your paper with my grammatical ...

Hello. My name is Em and I will be reviewing your story. Brace yourself for my harsh criticisms... Introduction June 10th,1692 Bridget's head bumped against the bottom of the cart. ...

Alright, I will be reviewing your story. Kind of harshly. So I am apologizing up front. pattering against the collapsing, deteriorating roof. Okay, two plot-type questions: Does the baby not ...

Hola! I'm Em and I will be attacking your paper with my grammatical evils. Forgive me if I seem harsh. I was either 2 minutes away from being a dead ...

Alright, so i vaguely recall reviewing the first six chapters of this and i must say i am a bit disappointed. The first part of this one is good but ...

I found this hugely amusing. You did a great job with parallelism and what not. Your rhyming only seemed force on one line: the part about the broken chair was ...

Due to my oober busy schedule during the school year, I have only JUST NOW gotten your message that you sent almost a year ago about your update to Partly ...

Wonderful. Absolutely Wonderful. I noticed a few gramatical errors here and there but it wasn't anything major. In any case, I FIRMLY BELIEVE that you should keep going with this. ...

I would have to say Eragon. I saw the movie first and was all, "this is cool I guess." A year later I read the book then watched the movie ...

Alright, so I found this lovely prologue after I had reviewed Chapter 1. I am now seeing Chp. 1 in a new, significantly more flattering light. so, to review the ...

Hmm, alright. Ok. Umm... This was interesting and is going to be tricky to review because I've never really read anything like it and I'm not sure if I like ...