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I liked this one. But as mentioned above, I think the rhyming took a little away from the poem. Also, the last two lines felt abrupt and didn't really fit ...

I haven't written poetry in a while. I think that contributes a bit to my cliche-ness. -_- And I always have a problem with swaying between past and present tenses.... ...

Personally, I liked this poem. I was reminded vividly of how passionate I was with playing my flute. The imagry was beautiful, almost as if I was being walked through ...