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SCIENCE POEMS. Yesssssss!!!!! And philosophy interwoven! That's the best kind :P *tries to quieten herself and gather up some useful thoughts on the poem itself* So. Rarely do I find ...

If the first thing I made sure to do was to *like* this, then you can be certain you've done a good job. First of all, the subject matter itself ...

Well, I'm going to disagree here. Sure, poems need a healthy balance between literality and abstraction, reality and imagination, but sometimes a literal diction does indeed work best! After all, ...

So. A capturing title. And a whimsical piece, clearly. Not enough for me to fall in love with it, though - in fact, were it not for the first line ...

Antoinette - A unique tone, for sure. And it's told with the sort of simplicity that I would expect from the boy's point of view. I'm having trouble figuring out ...

Bubbles! So long since I read one of your poems! I must say, this was quite a treat. Simple but not simplistic - this evokes images well-known to everyone without ...

I'm always hesitant to comment on personal poems since they hold so much meaning that is beyond the poem for the writer. However, I was thinking about this just before ...

Wow. Rarely do I find something as creative as this. The style is chilling. It's sharp, poised, but distinctly elegant all the same. You have very appropriately placed this in ...

While I didn't enjoy this, I can certainly say that there's something interesting you made me think of. But first - a word on why not. At the beginning, the ...

Did you consider sticking this in fanfic? Since this reads like TWILIGHT and I'm suprised no one has explicitly stated that yet. If I want to read Twilight, I'll read ...

A poem about poetry. Yay. And we're discussing rhyme schemes, too - did you consider maybe starting up a thread in 'Poetry Discussion and Tips'? Because this reads about as ...

Hey Kamas! Not continuing on that 'Summer Poetry' thread? (Just curious :D). So, I had a read of the info on wiki after reading the poem, and it made much ...

Similar to the first one of yours I read, I believe. Which is why I enjoyed it so much. It's going in my favourites. Certainly, an arresting style. It's confident, ...

Hey Ace! You have a pretty cute database of imagery to use, clearly - things like 'safekeeping among the stars,' 'tuck the rain back into the stars,' 'pearly moon' made ...

Ah, late night insomnia. It's true that most poems are inspired by this phenomenon. What I hadn't expected was such a creative poem. It deviates from the usual almost wishy-washy ...