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Hey Attolia - Long time, no read for sure. Firstly, I want to say that I love experimentation in style and voice - I think it's important to be reasonably ...

Hey Hibiscus - Can't say I enjoyed this poem. Neither the subject matter struck me as particularly inventive, nor the way you addressed it. Mainly, whatever effect you wanted to ...

Hey Jagg - I find it hard to pinpoint why this reminded me of Siken so much (perhaps it is our mutual love for him :P), but it did. Maybe ...

Kylan - So, another experiment. My kind of experiment. I enjoyed this, despite its relative length. And I think I rarely summarise my opinion of a work as succinctly as ...

Hi careauboy - I won't comment on the specific punctuation etc errors, since I think that's been well covered already. However, I did find something interesting about this poem - ...

Hey CardDragon - So! A dream poem! These are often nonsensical, bizarre and career off in wild directions much like the human subconscious when allowed to run free. And this ...

Hey Hibiscus - Me again! And I am intrigued at the way your writing style is so flexible, so eagerly changed. While 'Senses' had all your i's dotted and t's ...

Hey Hibiscus - There was something refreshingly smooth about this, and I think that was control. That may in part be due to the enjambment, or indeed the shorter lines ...

Hey Solvalery - I thought at first that I'd critique it in Spanish, but I won't for a couple of reasons: my Spanish is not advanced enough, vocabulary-wise, to articulate ...

Hi leftnoa - When I see a poem as humorously cynical as this, I am intrigued. There is something so fascinating about the style, a kind of mundane character assessment ...

Hey Jon - There's something interesting about the tone here, the simplicity of it that does not at all border on the mundane, the kind of easy acceptance and non-judgemental ...

Kylan - I did actually read this when you first posted it, but wondered if there was much point in critiquing something so obviously autobiographical. Not that I cannot critique ...

Hey Kylan - Obviously, I don't see this as a poem just about peaches, what with the metaphor you take the extra mile to highlight in your title and all. ...

Hey Kylan - So, a maddening piece, a wholly unsatisfying one - and that is meant in the best of all possible ways. That effective use of conflict upon unresolved ...

Hey Kylan - I have been trying to decide what I felt about this piece for some time now. Whether I felt. Whether I was supposed to feel. Small Tremors ...