Navita

Oh. Wow. I didn't think much of the title, but thought I'd give the story a go anyway. And since it was told in such an innovative and intriguing style, ...

Just about everyone is tired of life in one way or another, and I felt tired of this poem from the first line, since the topic was cliche, and it ...

I LOVE a fantastic opening line - and this was one such :D. However, I'd suggest changing the title to something a little less obvious, to keep the mystery. Overall, ...

That was FUNNY :P. Probably not the response you were expecting, but I enjoyed it because it was original, and it was original because I don't see too many (if ...

Anything with a title like 'The Memory' will catch my eye, since I'm a sucker for all things deeply nostalgic. I wondered how creative you might get with this - ...

Well, what can I say, other than the fact that I really enjoyed this? So, I'm sorry, I'm not going to particularly helpful here at all, since this had beautiful ...

I enjoy poems with a healthy dash of nostalgia and something to remember. I seem to write out of my own experiences and knowledge a lot, so I can really ...

Heya Inkwell! I have a pretty big vocabulary, but I'm not so good with slang or brand-type words, so yes, I DID Google the word 'wayfarer,' which I was not ...

Hey UV! Those limericks were meant to be funny, and they were. I love a bit of light humour, with no heavy handed meaning or anything attached, for a short ...

Really - it's another interestin experiment on VOICE isn't it! At least I can actually comprehend what's going on here, unlike a couple of other poems of yours! Anyway. I ...

What is the purpose of this poem? Almost everything, save the one glaring exception ('honey-tinted clouds') is the perfect cliche. It slides off my tongue, absolutely tasteless, adds nothing to ...

The Spanish title certainly caught my eye. Me gusta mucho el espanol - de hecho, muchas lenguas me encantan; especialmente los que hablo! Anyway. The stars, the moon they have ...

Oh my God. I...this... It was just wow. I don't know how else to say it. I am not a big fan of sci fi - but this definitely caught ...

I can see this as a beginning to a novel - and that is most probably because how disjointed it is. I can imagine that you'd need a lot more ...

So...why did I read it to the end? Because I liked the idea - a woman playing poker with men. I probably would not have finished the piece had the ...