NathanielZykov

I really enjoyed this amazing work of flash fiction. The descriptions are all spectacular and really grips the reader. Something I noticed that I didn't really understand was the part ...

It was very interesting reading this. The opening two paragraphs were well written and made for a nice introduction to the story. There are a few things you may want ...

This is a funny poem! It's very impressive how you wrote it in 30 minutes. The rhyming is good and the lines transition smoothly. The story I feel is a ...

Interesting poem! I like the unusual length of lines and the comparison between writing and riding a Hippo made me chuckle. A few things to consider is maybe add a ...

I really enjoyed reading this poem, very mysterious! The way each stanza has alternating beginnings adds to the ambiguity. A one thing I noticed that could make this poem even ...

I really enjoyed reading this story. The way you keep the reader on their toes with the wings is amazing. Whenever I thought I was figuring them out, the story ...

nicely written! Both stories are interesting and I would very much like to learn more about the characters. There are a couple things you may want to consider, (feel free ...

This short story is truly a masterpiece! The pacing of the story is perfect and is engaging to the reader. The ending was heart wrenching, which made it more enjoyable ...