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What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a ...

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What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a ...

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What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a silly poem. What a ...

Hey! I haven't read the preceding chapters, so I won't be commenting on plot or characterization. But there is one thing I'd like to cover, and that's exposition. Take this ...

I haven't read the preceding chapters, so I'll keep my comments to the writing style and technique. First, I think there's a lot of comma splices, or at least a ...

I haven't read the first two chapters, but I briefly looked at them, and this chapter seems to be mostly a self-contained story. The other two either take place in ...

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The beginning completely intrigued me, because starting in the middle of a sentence is hot...and the phrasing of that first stanza was spot-on. Sparse and effective. Second stanza started out ...

I really like the way this part begins and ends. The beginning is interesting because it revolves around two people who are genuinely trying to determine what the other is ...

The behavior of the guards is erratic. Are they scared or not scared? Take this excerpt: His next movement is sudden and quick, surprising me as he grabs my arm. ...

Writing side stories to your main story is a great idea. It helps to flesh out the main story more, which in turn helps you to more fully realize your ...

30 likes and only a couple reviews! I always find those discrepancies kind of funny. But, it's not hard to see why it grew in popularity so quickly. It's a ...

Just to quickly remark on what previous commenters said, whether or not something qualifies as a poem is rather... vague. It usually, but not always, is a blend of both ...

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Hey! Ryu(AKA Southbound) Cevenost here for a review! Well, to start off with this was an original story, I haven't read anything like it before. I have to give you ...