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Re: Aldenora: Dust (Chapter 3)
I liked it! Good job! I'm looking forward to the next chapter! Keep writing, Narniafan4ever1
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: The Time Chamber. Chapter 2
:) Good job on the second chapter! I can not wait till the third one! Good job! Your characters are AWESOME Keep writing, Narnialover4ever1
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Forgetful.
LOL This was great! I laughed the whole time. Good job and keep writing!!
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Zombie.0
Oooh really dramatic! I liked it! I'm glad this is only the prolouge because I can't wait for more! Good job and keep writing! :D
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Untitled
The first line, I think, was the best! Good job! I am looking forward to more of your work :D
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: A Poem of the True "Heart"
Good job! My favorite line: In a better world, the heart would be a vessel,able to transportgood from oneto another'. It was really deep and I enjoyed it. Keep writing!
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Sealed by Fire- Chapter Two
Good job! This was a great 2nd chapter and I really enjoyed it! Your characters are great! Keep up the good work :D
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: My Forbidden Love
Good job! It was really cute! Most poems get boring at the end but yours didn't. Keep writing! :D
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Burning Skies
I love her innocence and sweetness! It was great! You explained everything from a little kids point of view which I really thought was great! Good job and keep up ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Forever with me
Hi! I really liked it! It was short and sweet, also very deep. It was a little confusing in the beginning but that just might be me. Good job and ...
Aug 28, 2011 -
Re: Shade- The First Immortal - chapter two
I liked it! Your character seemed real and alive. I could relate to him! Keep up the good work :)
Aug 23, 2011