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This made me laugh. You should write more of these! I really liked the humor. I think you should try a Cinderella one or a Sleeping Beauty. What was a ...

Oh I liked it!! It's really sweet and cute! When the waiter guy was say 'And maybe desert after' Desert is really spelled dessert. :) I liked it a lot!! ...

I like it a lot!! Good job! I can not wait till the second chapter! :D The plot line seems very interesting :D Keep up the good work :) I'll ...

Good job!! I'm looking forward to the next chapter. The plot seems really good!! This is exactly the story I'm looking for. I like reading good work and I definetly ...

Wow extremely GREAT!! I liked it a lot!! The title caught my eye and I LOVED IT!! Good job!! Keep up the great work!! I'll be following you because I ...

Oh gosh, you got me teared up! So sweet and so romantic!!! 'One person stuck out of the people. Her once bright colored clothes were stained dark red and she ...

Geez this was sad :( But I liked it a lot! How about instead of: 'I swallowed a lump down my throat and nodded' This: I swallowed the lump in ...

Interesting! I liked it :) It was very deep but a little bit confusing at the beginning but I think that just might be me. Keep up the good work ...

Very good! This was a great and creative idea! I am looking forward to reading some other songs that you will write. 'There's something to be said for you With ...

I liked this a lot! Great job!! It was a lot better than I expected it to be and I think this might be one of my favorite stories :). ...

Good job! I liked this a lot! I read the other ones and I think this is the best yet :) 'However, nobody did anything that required much energy at ...

WOW! I want to see more scripts like this!! This should be a real play!! Great job!! The characters names are awesome! I liked the beginning :)Keep writing :)

Ooh great part!! My favorite was probably this... ' 'My heart pounded in my chest to an ever increasing beat. Everything was pitch black, but far from silent. Terrible roaring ...

Great third chapter! Your characters are great! IcyFlame kinda said all the things I was going to say :) keep writing :D

'But we talked about that. We talked about us. He admitted he'd missed our close friendship as much as I had, and was eager to continue rejuvenating it after tonight. ...