Nargles

I'm having trouble formatting it properly. There are meant to be a space after every 4 lines. The last stanza is 5 lines long.

You have made me fall in love with palindrome poems. This is truly incrdible. You have been able to create two seperate poems really, but not at the same time. ...

Hmmmm. Ok. What is it about to you? And anytime, if you want something to be reviewed just let me know!

Anytime, and sorry for the spam. Stupid ipad being stupid!

Yes it is the sunset, or sunrise. But for me it is the sunset. :) Thanks for the review!

Yes it is the sunset, or sunrise. But for me it is the sunset. :) Thanks for the review!

Yes it is the sunset, or sunrise. But for me it is the sunset. :) Thanks for the review!

Hey, I understand what you mean by the rhyme, I was going for more the way it sounds when read out loud than on paper. As for the lines, the ...

Hey, I understand what you mean by the rhyme, I was going for more the way it sounds when read out loud than on paper. As for the lines, the ...

Hey, I understand what you mean by the rhyme, I was going for more the way it sounds when read out loud than on paper. As for the lines, the ...

Hey, I understand what you mean by the rhyme, I was going for more the way it sounds when read out loud than on paper. As for the lines, the ...

Thanks heaps for your lovely reply. Glad you liked it heaps!

Thanks for the comment, I'm wondering what you mean by unfinished, and why you think it is? This way I can try and fix it. :) Thanks

1 word- Breathtaking

Yes, colours is spelt with a 'u' so sorry to any of my American followers, but us Aussies tend to follow the British spelling of most words.