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Woah- that last bit was damn tense. Lovely short read to- um... give me nightmares. You're have a great skill for creating tension- short sentences gives a great sense of ...

"We all wear masks- metaphorically speakiiiiing" (If you haven't seen The Mask, ignore this comment.) Lovely writing, lovely imagery; overall, basically just a lovely poem. Lots of harsh truth in ...

This is really sweet- you have a great nack for poetry! Your writing is powerful, and I like the repetition used at the beginning of lines. One thing I would ...

Happy review day, thingy! Wow, this is short, but it works- you've introduced a villain who seems really bad-ass, and the writing is powerful. Writing a powerful prologue like this ...

Hey, I shall be reviewing you on the YWS Reviews Day, or... thingy. Anyway, great start- you writing is fantastic. One thing I'm going to say, I think you should ...

This is a fantastic starting chapter- you're writing is beautiful, and flows gracefully! ;) You've thrust a lot of questions into my mind, and undoubtedly many other minds, and I ...

Once again, Eoghan, you're writing has amazed me. Great action, but I would like to see some of the details- it just says the guards dropped like flies. But how? ...

Lovely writing, once again my friend. Nice to see you can write actions scenes pretty damn well too! Love the way Guido kicks the Surgeon "had" in the shin! I ...

You wrote this in a rush? Wow- this writing is top notch, lovely descriptions and the main character is introduced well. One thing I think that should be made a ...

I really like it! Description is fantastic, the events are clear and the fast pacing works really well. You've built up a great, strong and determined character- she doesn't say ...

I love it. The introduction is really good; sets the tone of the story, and introduces the character of the surgeon very well. The character of the Count is, to ...