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This was really fantastic, with some beautiful ideas and imagery. The message is clear- break free from racial prejudice! This is a topic that everyone should be fighting for, and ...

The sad part about the truth Is that you know it’s true. You can’t escape the fact That you can’t escape the truth. The two last lines are probably my ...

This was awesome, with fantastic ideas and imagery. With poetry, it's best if you capitalise each line, if for no reason other than it looks better. Trust me, if you ...

This is beautifully surreal. I love the slender shape, and how it curves and flows- you can just tell how this creature would move if it existed. The lines and ...

Congratulations on third place! Here is your review prize! First of all- the ideas are the best things about this piece. I can already see that the ideas you have ...

Congratulations on second place! This is your first review prize. So, first of all, I love this idea. I think the idea "makes" a horror story- and the idea of ...

Hey there, congratulations on first place! This is your second review prize. The best thing about this short story, in my opinion, is the mystery behind it. Throughout the story, ...

This was pretty cool- starts off with an interesting premise about an evil overlord killing every women, but this wavers somewhat when you introduce a rather uninteresting character. As mentioned ...

This was fast paced, and pretty exciting. Your descriptions of people are done very well, and the main character, and his friend Sam, the "kid thieves" seem like pretty interesting ...

This was actually a very sweet piece, although it could have been a little more exciting. First of all, why should I care that the fish has died? That sounds ...

First of all, as mentioned above, capitalise the start of every line in a poem. It's a must really, otherwise it looks a little unprofessional. Also, try not to interrupt ...

Could almost be a haiku, if you get my drift. In fact- rewriting this as two, maybe three haikus would be better for this poem. It is very beautiful- you're ...

I was really irritated after reading the review above, as "DrunkOnWriting" had mentioned really the only thing that was going to nitpick about this poem, about making the long lines ...

Starting a story with the death of a character is incredibly clever; it leaves room for a lot of character development (characters turning from moping, grieving so-and-so's into strong willed ...

Hey, pal, I'm here to review your piece! So first of all; you're pretty good! Good action, it's interesting and the flow is pretty good. The only nitpicks I have ...