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Re: Josephine and Peppurrcorn
Thank you for your review! Sometimes my sentences can get really long and i don't even notice, so thank you for pointing that out. I will improve that in the ...
Sun Apr 28, 2019 12:51 pm -
Re: Josephine and Peppurrcorn
thank you very much for your review! :) Don't worry about being nit-picky. The more critic I get, the more I can improve! I honestly thought there would be more ...
Sun Apr 28, 2019 8:47 am -
Re: (Vampire) Temp tittle! (part 1)
I really like it! Maybe you could try to describe the characters a bit more visually? Idk thats just something that i though. Otherwise i really love your writing. please ...
Sat Apr 27, 2019 10:28 pm - Re: Josephine and Peppurrcorn Sat Apr 27, 2019 10:23 pm
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Re: The stars in their eyes
I love how descriptive your writing is. Your word choice is really beautiful
Sat Apr 27, 2019 10:16 pm