NaomiPeppurrcorn

Thank you for your review! Sometimes my sentences can get really long and i don't even notice, so thank you for pointing that out. I will improve that in the ...

thank you very much for your review! :) Don't worry about being nit-picky. The more critic I get, the more I can improve! I honestly thought there would be more ...

I really like it! Maybe you could try to describe the characters a bit more visually? Idk thats just something that i though. Otherwise i really love your writing. please ...

I love how descriptive your writing is. Your word choice is really beautiful