Nai-Xi

Wow just wow. I'm gonna write this poem down frame it and put it up on my wall. Does this count as a review if its just praise? Doesn't matter ...

He's a madman.

Thank you so much! :D

Thank you! to give some context to this piece I wrote this YEARS ago. Back then writing was just a way to get my ideas out rather than focusing on ...

Thank you so much! :D

Thank you! It always the little things that get me when i complete something! Even something as little as grammar and spelling. -_- Im so glad you like my piece!

"The self" is a pronoun in itself like in buddhism. So when i say he is coupled with the self he is joined together with self. I used couple because ...

I had no idea you took the dog's perspective until you used the word bark. Very good personification. The one line that got me was "It's okay, there's no need ...

Wow. This captures anything that is innocent and in love. You did a great job of the rhythm of the poem.