NafaKitty

Ah okay! Thanks for the advice on the quote. ^_^ and I intend on continuing to read. I'm extremely fascinated!

Lol it's supposed to be like an anime. I wrote it that way :P. And thanks for the suggestion. I'm going to try to do like the other person said ...

They're names actually do have a meaning in the story ^_^. That meaning, will be found out later on. And I thought that second paragraph didn't flow right I just ...

I thought so too, but couldn't figure anything out that seemed to fit.

It's referring to something I'm going through right now.

Thank you for your review! It was very helpful. I was actually going to edit it today, and you just helped that a long! As for your P.S., It's an ...

I purposely wrote it so you wouldn't know what's going on. :) Things will be all explained in later chapters. As for the old English, only some of the characters ...