Nadia

I loved this, it was just very easy and natural to read. Are you going to make it in a multichapter story, because at the moment it seems a bit ...

Hi miriam, am pretty new so you'll have to bear with me :S I really loved this poem, its open to alot of speculation from the reader as the setting ...

wow, i really like this poem. The rhyming pattern make it sound quite simple, almost childlike but when you get further on in the poem it goes from childlike to ...

wow, i love this poem! To be honest i think you haven't got any reviews because there is nothing really people would change, i for one wouldn't. Its just so ...

awww, aren't we all romantics at heart! Just a quick question out of curiosity, When you say "goals fall silent to lust." does this mean that ambitions disappear when your ...

Ok, am rly confused with this. I know it's probably because I can't understand :~ But I LOVED the imagery in this poem, at the start you said "Inside this ...

Okay, kind of my first review so sorry if its bad, just some things I noticed. I do like this poem but I feel its just the frame work, you ...