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Ah thank you that was much appreciated !

I was illustrating how love is the worst, due to its ability to promise so much yet then take it all away. Its an expectation and disappointment theme. :) Thanks ...

After re-reading it my self I totally agree the last lines were rather bemusing. I've also edited it a touche to try to make the 'four lettered word' less ambiguous. ...

This is excellent, it really grasped my attention and your subltle use of rhyme made it easy to read. I can't pick a favourite part I enjoyed it all! Keep ...

Ah thank you I completely missed those errors. Though the first one you pointed out is purposeful in a way to suggest a disjointed thought patter or logic. I do ...