MythWriter99

Love it! I noticed a few typing errors in your writing, but other than that I couldn't really find anything wrong. The story doesn't move to quickly or to slowly, ...

Okay so normally I would have dropped this book like a hot coal. I hate thrillers but this book reminds me of that old movie, Crow, which I loved. Now ...

Okay so the tittle was cool. I enjoyed the first part, it was interesting and fast paced. But I had trouble enjoying the overall piece because I was distracted by ...

Alright so first off I can't help but wonder what the point of this story is. It's interesting enough but is that it, or is there more. Because if that's ...

Okay I don't really know what to say about this work. I mean it's interesting and so far I don't really know what's going on. But out of what I've ...

Okay so this was an interesting read. I'm a bit confused about what is going on which is probably why I'm hooked on the book. But the story was hard ...

Okay, two things, first off SLOW DOWN and add details. You have good ideas but the way you write them is a little irritating. I mean here you have this ...

WOW, first off I'm totally hooked. I want to know what the heck happened to the girl and how. I want to know who this devastatingly handsome British boy is ...

Hey mnkeygrl11, Although the concept of having supernatural creatures enslave humans and have them fight to the death is well . . . awesome, I did feel like it had ...

As for Lava and Esther Sylvester, this is just a excerpt from a chapter, I read it when I was looking through the literary choices, you know in that little ...

This was probably one of the best short stories I have read in a while. I liked the drama, action, and bit of romance. The concept is pretty cool too, ...

Who cares about the length as long as it wasn't boring, which it certainly wasn't. I thought this was an interesting read, but i have to agree with reason and ...

Who cares about the length as long as it wasn't boring, which it certainly wasn't. I thought this was an interesting read, but i have to agree with reason and ...

You are crazy if you think this sucks. I mean it's definitely not perfect but to say it sucks is an exaggeration. I read all three parts of the book ...

I enjoyed reading this work, but it was a bit confusing at times. I don't know if you meant to be so cryptic and intend to reveal more details throughout ...